FOUR FEATHERS PRESS ONLINE EDITION: POINTS AND LINES Send up to three poems on the subject of or at least mentioning the words point and/or line, totaling up to 150 lines in length, in the body of an email message or attached in a Word file to donkingfishercampbell@gmail.com by 11:59 PM PST on November 17th. No PDF's please. Color artwork is also desired. Please send in JPG form. No late submissions accepted. Poets and artists published in Four Feathers Press Online Edition: Points and Lines will be published online and will be invited to read at the Saturday Afternoon Poetry Zoom meeting on Saturday, November 18th between 3 and 5 pm PST.

Wednesday, November 15, 2023

Carl Stilwell AKA CaLokie

Psalm 150 & All That Jazz


Hallelujah!

Praise the everything to which I am nothing!

Praise the nothing to which I am everything!


Praise the universe beyond us!

Praise the universe within us!


Praise with Freddie Hubbard trumpet tour of Cantaloupe Island!

Praise with Purple Haze from Jimi Hendrix’s electrifying guitar!


Praise with Bob Dylan’s Mr. Tambourine Man!

Praise with a Shakira - Hips Don't Lie dance!


Praise with Newport Jazz Festival secular humanists 

dancing to gospel beat of Mahalia Jackson!


Praise with Don Cornelius Soul Train line dancers introducing 

on syndicated television show latest dance moves!


Praise with Eric Dolphy playing Jitterbug Waltz on flute!

Praise with loud crashing cymbals of a Elvin Jones drum proclamations!


Praise with Willie “life-of-the-party” Bobo on conga!

Let everything that has breath

sock-it-to-me, sock-it-to-me, sock-it-to-me! 




Ode to the Period


Where the comma is hesitant,

you are resolute.


An apostrophe’s known for its omissions

and you for being thorough.


Abrupt the dash--

You get to the point. 


Ellipses enigmatic…

You translucent are.


The semicolon initiates;

you consummate. 


The following don’t stop: waves, greed and colons. 

You do.


The exclamation point is excessive

but you are stable. Yes!


Does not the question bring uncertainty

and you closure?


As the old quotation marks, “When all is said 

and done, you are there.”




I Remember Amalek*


O God of my Bible Belt fathers who through 

the prophet Samuel ordered him to say unto Saul,

“The Lord sent me to anoint thee to be king over Israel.

Now therefore hearken thou unto the voice of the words

of the Lord.

Thus saith the Lord of hosts: ‘I remember what Amalek 

did to Israel, how he lay in wait for him on the way 

when he came up from Egypt.

Now go and smite Amalek and utterly destroy all 

that they have, and spare them not; but slay 

both man and woman, infant and suckling, 

ox and sheep, camel and ass.’” **


ELOI, ELOI…?—***

What did these children and babies have to do 

with what Amalek did to Israel a few centuries 

before they were even born that you ordered 

them to be wiped off the face of the earth?


I read both the Bible through twice before I was 15 

and was deeply disturbed by what was surely a war crime 

but the godly Bible professors at Bob Jones University, 

the college I attended during the 50’s, shrugged off

the genocide described in 1st Samuel 15:1-3 while 

insisting the scriptural point was that King Saul 

had to be punished for failing to kill King Agag 

and the best livestock of the Amalekites. 


Jesus Christ, man! What the hell was your problem? 

There still wasn’t enough screams and bloody mommy 

and baby bodies to propitiate your wrath?


I didn’t hear any cries for mercy and sword whacks either 

in the liberal commentary on the same Bible passage.

The New Interpreter’s Study Bible only remarked, 

“Samuel orders Saul to avenge the events of 

Exodus 17:8-16 through holy war which 

forbids taking prisoners or booty.”

Lord, Lord, love me.

I’m a Liberal.


When I went to BJU and later Fuller Theological Seminary, 

eminent archeologist William F. Albright was still living.

He believed the physical evidence for the historical events 

behind many Old Testament narratives had been found.


This was wishful thinking.

Excavations at Tell es-Sultan, did not find any traces 

of Jericho’s destruction during the time when Joshua 

led army of chosen people to conquer and occupy—

excuse me, enter the promised land. 


But don’t get me wrong, God almighty.

Every time I hear Mahalia Jackson sing, 

“Joshua fit the Battle of JerichoJericho- Jericho…

And the walls come tumbling down,”

O my Sweet Lord,

I’m a believer!


Anyway, there’s also no archeological evidence 

or historical records of Hebrew slaves in Egypt. 

According to Wikipedia, the “consensus of modern 

scholars is that the Pentateuch does not give 

an accurate account of the origins of the Israelites, 

who appear instead to have come together as 

a separate and distinct people from the indigenous 

Canaanite culture in the central highlands of Canaan 

in the late 2nd millennium BCE.


So with all due respect, All Knowing God, what I’d 

like to understand is how can you remember 

what never happened?


Of course you didn’t answer.

The genocide in 1st Samuel 15 never happened either. 

According to 1st Samuel 30:1–2, the Amalekites invaded 

the Negev and Ziklag in the Judean/Philistine border 

area towards the end of the reign of King Saul, burning 

Ziklag and taking its citizens away into captivity. 

The future king David led a successful mission against 

the Amalekites to recover "all that the Amalekites 

had carried away.”


Thank God, you changed your mind on collective punishment, 

when you said in Deuteronomy 24:16, “Parents shouldn’t be 

executed because of what their children have done; neither should 

children be executed because of what their parents have done. 

Each person should be executed for their own guilty acts.”


Ended conversation with evolving and elusive deity…

All shook up by fictitious account of ancient holocaust…

Turn on television…

See rubble from Israel Defense Force bombing…

Hear TV voice—

“Over 10,000 dead in Gaza…

More than 4,000 of them— 

Children…”



* A quote from 1st Samuel 15:2 by Benjamin Netanyahu

** I Samuel 15:1-3 21st Century King James Version

*** Mark 15:34

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